Arguing a Position

 

 

Such is the nature of a technical description. I wrote my technical description in similar fashion, making sure to break down every part and every part into their own components, explaining everything.

 

Below I have attached my first submission, second revised submission, and third revised submission for the technical description:

 

 

Technical description first submission here

I lacked in my writing in formatting of my technical description and communication with my audience. The images I used were difficult to see, and thus the audience would not be able to understand them.

 

Technical description second revised submission here

Through doing my revisions, I was able to get more feedback about how specific and precise I had to be in my language when discussing my subjects, setting me up for a better technical writing structure.

Technical description third revised submission here  

The final set of revisions I did for the technical description implement a good deal of what I had learned through out the course. I had tried to correct most of everything I viewed as wrong with my new paradigm. Lacking consistency on my previous assignment however, the issue ended up being repeated as I had never corrected it. I view consistency to be very important now in the revision process, as without it, the piece only expands to a part of its potential.

 

 

Below I have attached my self reflection, my first revision of my self reflection, and my second revision of it.

 

 

Technical description reflection

My technical description reflection was one of the only assignments that were I was truly near successful, with the final revision of the technical description coming in second. I had put in a lot of effort into understanding how to format a reflection, and had learned how to implement it to this new assignment. For future assignments, I will treat the revision process as I have done and continue to grow in my writing, implementing and understanding new principles as they come for the goal of growth.