Memo’s are often used to address problems professionally. Writing a memo in this class was an opening experience into the professional structure of surfacing pressing problems.
Below I have attached links to my first submission, and revised second submission of my memo:
Memo first submission here
When I received the memo back, I was in shock. I did not know how to address all the comments made so I ended up rewriting the whole piece.
Memo revised second submission here
Unfortunately, the comments that I did not answer in my original piece resurfaced in this one. There were fundamental issues in my technical writing that I needed to address. This was a clear sign that I was doing something wrong and that I needed to change.