Memo

 

 

Memo’s are often used to address problems professionally. Writing a memo in this class was an opening experience into the professional structure of surfacing pressing problems.

 

Below I have attached links to my first submission, and revised second submission of my memo:

 

Memo first submission here

When I received the memo back, I was in shock. I did not know how to address all the comments made so I ended up rewriting the whole piece.

Memo revised second submission here

Unfortunately, the comments that I did not answer in my original piece resurfaced in this one. There were fundamental issues in my technical writing that I needed to address. This was a clear sign that I was doing something wrong and that I needed to change.